tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8935860799256141508.post3343733025559008255..comments2023-05-19T13:17:44.494+01:00Comments on Alex Park - Computer Animation Arts, UCA Rochester: Close Encounters of the Third Kind - Film Reviewal parkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06433083514151221861noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8935860799256141508.post-62878404152563547672017-03-08T09:26:24.819+00:002017-03-08T09:26:24.819+00:00Hi Al,
I enjoyed this review, particularly the wa...Hi Al,<br /><br />I enjoyed this review, particularly the way you put the film into the context of the way space travel was viewed in the 60s and 70s.<br /><br />Just a couple of points regarding quoting and paraphrasing; you have 3 references in your bibliography, but only one quote... are the other 2 references from where you have taken ideas from other sources, or paraphrased them? If this is the case, you need to still reference within the text too... this is the example given in the referencing guide -<br /><br />As Crane (1965:62) points out, the notion of an invisible college has been explored in the sciences.<br /><br />Or<br /><br />The notion of an invisible college has been explored in the sciences (Crane, 1972:62)<br /><br />Your bibliography also needs to be arranged in alphabetical order, by author's surname, so in your case,<br /><br />Bradshaw<br />Ebert<br />ErrigoJackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com