tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8935860799256141508.post496548527359496368..comments2023-05-19T13:17:44.494+01:00Comments on Alex Park - Computer Animation Arts, UCA Rochester: Film Review - Metropolisal parkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06433083514151221861noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8935860799256141508.post-37799218761727532552016-09-28T13:50:59.160+01:002016-09-28T13:50:59.160+01:00Another thorough review Alex :)
Good to see you us...Another thorough review Alex :)<br />Good to see you using some quotes this time too - what you need to try and do in the next review, is embed them into your discussion. So for example, you could have said something like,<br /><br />'Another theme expressed by the film is the importance of speaking the same language and fully understanding one another. As Hall says in his article,“Its moral is that the brains and the hands fail when the heart (love) does not work with them” (Hall, 1927)<br /><br />By doing this, the quote becomes part of your writing, rather than it just being dropped in and left sitting there. See also how I have referenced the quote - you only need the surname and the year in brackets. Have another look at the referencing guide to see how your bibliography needs to be set out. (You will also find info here on how to reference the images correctly.)<br />http://www.uca.ac.uk/library/academic-support/harvard-referencing/<br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com